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Tuesday, 24 October 2017

the beach

Title:the beach
name :Champion
Date:17.10
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                                  Brainstorming
Beach, net, family ,truck ,jelly fish, fish, wave

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On Saturday me and my family went to Okahu bay first we sat on the grass and then my auntie and my mum made yummy sandwiches.  We walked to the park but there were these mean boys who would not share  the swings and my cousin ran to my aunties and said “mum that boy won’t share.”


Then it was getting dark and my dad set the net in the sea so we ran in and helped my dad to put the net in the sea.  One of my cousins got stung on the leg by a jellyfish so the dad told us get out of the sea  cause the waves of the sea push the jellyfish into the net. Then in the morning me and my dad went in his truck back to Okahu bay when we got there it  was so cold that we had to go to the sea to pull the net back in when we pulled it back in we went home to untangle the net.We saw a snapper..a crab and a  jellyfish and a baby stingray.  I went in the shower to get the fish smell out of me then my cousin got angry at me  cause he said “When your dad wakes you up wake me up to.” Then I said “But you will wake up and then fall asleep in the car. Then me and my dad will be in the sea getting the net while you are sleeping not fair.”

2 comments:

messiah t said...

wow champion that sound like a really great story i really liked how you seed every thing that you done on saturday great job champion.

Anonymous said...

Hi Champion. That sounded like you have a fun time while you were there. Keep up the fantastic work!

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