On a very sunny day kane got his kite from his dad and kane was surprise from his dad then kane said let go to the beach and go fly my kite around and around so mum came along with us.
At the beginning a boy named kane was being a good boy and got a present from his mother and father it was a blue and yellow kite.He asked his dad if he could go to the beach to fly his brand new blue and yellow kite. Dad said “ Yes it’s a hot so let's go.” Then after that they all got in the car, and went to the beach. After that Kane ran super fast like usain bolt and ran to the shore. After that kane flew his kite dad looked and saw how fun it looked and asked kane if he could fly the kite and he said “ ok just don't lose it.” So dad ran, and he jumped up and he caught the kite.
so never give your kite or any thing alse.
1 comments:
Hi Champion. I really liked the moral of the story. Don't forget to use capital letters and full stops.
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